Monday 16 June 2014

Describing words

I am learning to use words to describe my leaf creature. I have used some amazing words like whoosh and whish. I have used some fullstops. I am proud of my work.

I  was walking on the beach. All of a  sudden a leaf  creature  up  in to  the  air  waving his strong  arms. It was amazing when it jumped up. His leaves are  brown and red. When he  waves arms it goes whish and whoosh!

Dayton

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