Thursday 13 November 2014

Thursday 6 November 2014

Using Descriptions


Once upon a time there was a little boy called Jack. He lived in the deep forest and he had a cow. They he  sold the cow for beans and the beans turned into a little beanstalk. They lived in a dark cottage. They were not very happy. They had no money. Then Jack climbed the beanstalk and he looked around the place. Then he saw a pot of gold. He took the gold down the beanstalk and he lived happily ever after.


I am a super star because I'm a great writer. I used two descriptions.